@ BreakYourHeart Thank you! It's taken a while, but it's all there! Yeah, some guy I work with decided it would be a good idea to sexually harrass me for 2 months, but he's got the hint now! And thank you! i'm so worried about it. xo
I liked this chapter! =) I'm glad that you got everything done like you needed to. And stalkers?! o_O And good luck on your driving test, i'm sure you'll do brilliantly!
@ BreakYourHeart Thank you! I'm stupidly busy with work and I feel like a failure when I don't write, and even more when I don't write anything good! Hopefully there'll be more soon :)
I liked the ending a lot, it was short and sweet =) And don't feel like you have to write something you don't think is good and post it just for you readers, we won't mind if you take more time on each chapter to make it the way you want it to be.
Good conclusion! The middle part was a little confusing, you never covered how Carla got into Dan's bed, or how/why they were mostly naked. Idk, i guess it was implied and i just need to read it again to understand. Anyway, good job!
Good conclusion! The middle part was a little confusing, you never covered how Carla got into Dan's bed, or how/why they were mostly naked. Idk, i guess it was implied and i just need to read it again to understand. Anyway, good job!