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  • FrankJScott

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  • minorasmith

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    I hope you start writing again too!!
    December 4th, 2013 at 11:49pm
  • blueeyesdontlie

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    @ BreakYourHeart
    and you too love!
    August 1st, 2013 at 11:12pm
  • BreakYourHeart

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    It's fine love! I understand your business, i'm in the same situation! Good luck!
    August 1st, 2013 at 08:41pm
  • Rev. Micki Plague

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    I miss this story :( I hope you get the chance to update soon. You sound hectic though so I understand if it takes a while :)
    July 31st, 2013 at 12:54pm
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    Please update!!
    July 21st, 2013 at 07:18pm
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    But yay! It's time for 24 hours of crazy animal sex!
    June 11th, 2013 at 07:53am
  • OvercastGirl

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    The biting the lip thing sounds like 50 Shades of Grey. Just saying...
    June 11th, 2013 at 06:38am
  • BreakYourHeart

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    That was some fun smut ;) haha
    Dannah all the way!
    May 21st, 2013 at 12:30am
  • blueeyesdontlie

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    @ Rev. Micki Plague
    Thank you so much! I'm off work again this week so hopefully there will be more :)
    May 13th, 2013 at 07:11pm
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    This is a brilliant story. I really like Hannah as a character and how Phil has basically become a big brother to Louise :) I can't wait for more
    May 12th, 2013 at 08:33pm
  • blueeyesdontlie

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    @ BreakYourHeart
    Thank you! It's taken a while, but it's all there!
    Yeah, some guy I work with decided it would be a good idea to sexually harrass me for 2 months, but he's got the hint now!
    And thank you! i'm so worried about it. xo
    May 5th, 2013 at 10:14pm
  • BreakYourHeart

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    I liked this chapter! =) I'm glad that you got everything done like you needed to.
    And stalkers?! o_O
    And good luck on your driving test, i'm sure you'll do brilliantly!
    May 5th, 2013 at 04:35am
  • Lucia yum

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    Omergerd update itttt!!!!!
    March 31st, 2013 at 10:39am
  • blueeyesdontlie

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    @ BreakYourHeart
    Thank you! I'm stupidly busy with work and I feel like a failure when I don't write, and even more when I don't write anything good! Hopefully there'll be more soon :)
    February 18th, 2013 at 10:48pm
  • BreakYourHeart

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    I liked the ending a lot, it was short and sweet =) And don't feel like you have to write something you don't think is good and post it just for you readers, we won't mind if you take more time on each chapter to make it the way you want it to be.
    February 18th, 2013 at 07:41pm
  • blueeyesdontlie

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    Ah, thanks. I didn't really like the chapter. I'll probably get into more detail about everything in the next chapter or something?
    February 7th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • BreakYourHeart

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    Good conclusion! The middle part was a little confusing, you never covered how Carla got into Dan's bed, or how/why they were mostly naked. Idk, i guess it was implied and i just need to read it again to understand. Anyway, good job!
    February 7th, 2013 at 05:53am
  • BreakYourHeart

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    Good conclusion! The middle part was a little confusing, you never covered how Carla got into Dan's bed, or how/why they were mostly naked. Idk, i guess it was implied and i just need to read it again to understand. Anyway, good job!
    February 7th, 2013 at 05:53am
  • BreakYourHeart

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    WOOWOWOWOUEIRGPIAURGUIABGF awww yissssssss I'm all "YOU GO GURL!" right now ahahahahah. This is gonna be AWESOME.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 07:13pm