Autumn Leaves - Comments

Oh my god. This was amazing. Like, really well written, really sad (I almost teared up) and used a lot of good descriptions. It made me deeply sad when Harry was feeling sad, and happy when he was happy. I just... ugh. Love it so much!!!

I already love the layout, and that I have a visual for the characters (though I'm one to talk, half the time I forget to add that). Oh and that Harry is in it...it's like you know that I love him. haha.

I skimmed first, just to look at length of the story and I've got to say I'm excited already that the whole thing is narrative. I really admire people who can write complete narrative. It says a lot about their ability to write description.

A part of him had always felt like she had always been there. -the wording of this sentence is a little off.

This was such a magnificent read. I loved every paragraph. I can't really explain it other then saying it was just beautiful. You have a great writing style. Autumn Leaves is probably my favorite Ed Sheeran song so I was nervous giving it out but this is just the perfect story to match that song. It was just so raw, it made me want to cry!!!