You Gave Me Forever - Comments

  • calousedheart

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    omg this was amazing! i love it!
    January 23rd, 2013 at 05:14am
  • la dispute.

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    This was so good! I wanted to be angry with Matt, but I also ended up just feeling sad for him. For a moment, I seriously thought 'oh, shit! Maybe Cindy is gonna end up being a crazy bitch!' When she told Matt it was time to play her game and sent that mail. I'm glad she didn't hurt, in the physical sense, Natti or Dylan, because that would have just been awful. I was sort of hoping Matt would have gotten to tell her the truth before she discovered it some other way, but damn if he didn't get to. In my mind, things work out for them in the end, so I'm not feeling all completely sad for them. Lol.
    December 30th, 2012 at 11:13pm
  • hachie

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    Wow this is amazing! I can't believe Matt would do that to his wife who gave him a son! And now having an affair with that bitch Cindy has come back and bit him in the ass. Because he potentially destroyed his marriage for good, there is little chance that Natti will ever forgive him for his infidelity. And now his friends and family will find out that he has been cheating on his wife with another woman he met at a freaking concert and slept her! And now Dylan is going to through so much pain because of his poor choices.I really hope you make this into a full length story! Amazing oneshot~
    December 30th, 2012 at 08:23pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Ouch, nothing like cold, harsh reality slapping you in the face. This story was so good and so realistic. I loved it! You did a really great job! And I like how you followed his real life , it really gave the story credibility. Again, this was so good:)
    December 29th, 2012 at 08:03am
  • CharmedLuna

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    Oh my goodness! This brought me to tears. You did an incredible job.
    December 29th, 2012 at 05:58am
  • saint james.

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    I really enjoyed reading this. You did an awesome job and I loved how you branched off with the idea of the photo. It was so sad at the end when Natti left Matt with their son. He should have realized his consequences before he cheated on her and broke his promise to her. I also loved that you incorporated your photo in the banner. Thank you for joining my contest. :)
    December 29th, 2012 at 02:02am