i squealed when steph told me to read this! there aren't any good devin fics here and i'm pretty much rolling around in happy fangirl land right now!!!
the first chapter is lovely and you should definitely continue. i like how much like the real devin you made this one. like when i met him at one of their concerts he complimented me on my clothes and seeing you use that trait of him really hooked me in.
I'M SO FUCKING EXCITED ABOUT THIS YOU HAVE NO IDEA I'M ABOUT TO PRINT IT OUT AND POST IT ON THE FRIDGE AND PUT KAWAII AF MAGNETS AROUND IT -panic-
I love the details you go into; it sets the atmosphere up quite nicely and it's easy to get sucked into. The wording flows, there are no tangents, and I LOVE THIS ALREADY OKAY IF YOU DON'T CONTINUE I'LL CRY FOREVER AND PESTER YOU UNTIL YOU DO.