At first read, I didn't understand what was happening but the second time I read it, it turned out to be pretty cute. The first part made me really curious as to who she was talking to, since there was no name and all. Then Liam and then !!! so yeah. I would have liked it more if there was more back-story but maybe it's just me. There were a few typos such as Faye couldn't breath. But overall, the story was a nice read. :)
May 5th, 2013 at 03:07pm
