Star Boy - Comments

I was so very thrilled and impressed with this story! I feel like the end might have been resolved a little too fast, but that's just my personal opinion. Other than that, this was really an amazing story. Although, I might be biased a little because of the fact that I am completely in love with The Doctor ;) And you know, I've never actually really liked Bow Tie until now xD I thought he was a horrible actor for Doctor Who and I wanted the tenth doctor back.

Anyway, that's off-topic, and I think you did an absolutely brilliant job! If you haven't already, you might consider making a chaptered fan-fiction for Doctor Who. I'm sure a lot of people would love to read it

This actually felt like a real Doctor Who episode. The way you wrote made it so easy to picture everything in my mind and it was just like seeing an actual episode. You write so well, you should be writing a book, seriously. And you should definitely write an episode for the show. That would be amazing!

I really, really enjoyed this, I don't even know what to say. I normally don't read Doctor Who stories because they never really feel like Doctor Who and it all just feels weird, but this was just like the real thing and you were able to drag me into the story from the first few lines. And you were really able to portray The Doctor just as he is in the show, good job!

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This was lovely. Really, I didn't expect it to be, but it so was! I've never really been into Doctor Who or watched it, so I was expecting to get very lost, But I didn't, so what was a plus!
I love your writing style and now I wish this was more than a one shot. You captured the characters so well, it was amazing. You made the Doctor really goofy but the story didn't end up being stupid.

I really wish you'd turn this into a chaptered story, I want more! Top marks on this one :)

But seriously why do you do this to me? This piece was so long and you should proud of me because normally I'll read half of it and comment on just that but I read the entire part of it and ugh, it was so damn precious and you've just broken my heart. I love how you've managed to include all these authors and make their lives somehow have intertwined with the Doctor and I love that they inspired Benjamin Button because literally that just made my day. Did you seriously think that through or were you like oH HEY I CAN DO THIS!? I love how you manage to keep the Doctor's goofiness but the piece is more serious than anything as well. Just. This is adorable and perfect and I hate you for it.

This so amazing. I've never really seen Doctor Who, I mean I've seen an episode or two, but I wasn't completely lost. I really enjoyed this one shot. I especially liked that you added Scott Fitzgerald into this story because he's one of my favorite authors as well. Did I mention that I love how you used the Curious Case of Benjamin Button theme to explain why the doctor never seems to truly age or die? I really like the relationship between the 11th Doctor and his companion. I'm glad she chose to forgive him for what happened. It's never hard forgiving someone for the death of another, but it shows that humans can always try at least.

This was beautiful piece. I hope to read more Doctor Who fanfics by you.

I wasn’t emotionally prepared for this.
Thought I was, I truly did, but then I started reading it and by the end of it, I was teary eyed and just, well a mess.
You captured the 11th Doctor beautifully! It felt like I was watching an episode of Doctor Who. I absolutely loved the period you chose to set it in, the fact that you wove the Fitzgerald into it, the other figures that he’d taken her to see as a way to make up for her loss, to make her happy. It was just. It was perfect.
anyway, I just wanted to say that this was great, and that if you ever start a full fledged Doctor Who story or wrote another one shot, I’d very much appreciate it if you were to please link me! :)

This was brilliant!
I really loved it.

Aw that was fantastic, I loved it! It was beautifully written and it gave me such magnificent feels.