I liked the idea behind your story. Lora's struggle to really see that she can fix her path is something everyone can relate to and then looking to Zacorra/Brian (idols for some people) as a positive influence just put a smile on my face. It's easy for fans to find the silver lining in their idols lives and what makes your story what it is, is that is only took one chance meeting between Lora and Brian/Zacorra to really change her life around.
I really enjoyed the magazine article you wrote and as a whole the story was nicely done. Nice work!
I really enjoyed the magazine article you wrote and as a whole the story was nicely done. Nice work!