Creatures. - Comments

I didnt expect Ryan to have a crush on Dani :o

Aw the bath that Devin did for her was so cute! :)

im officially obsessed with this story. I love it

This story every time is getting better!

Devin and Alex are my favorites. They're so cute together but is feel so bad for them!

No one can die!!!! Ill be so crushed!!!

@ colorfultears
Dani dies. Lol joking. We shall see though c:

I feel so bad for Alex and Devin :( but im glad shes okay and i hope Dani will be okay too. Great chapter :D

@ WakeUpTheSleepers
Awesome :DD

OMFG AMAZING!!!!!!

@ ToadsterXDXP
This may be true but seeing as Chris is a demon, I don't think the door really stood a chance against him lol. But thanks for the advice c:

I also enjoyed the foreshadowing about how Devin was planning to purpose, I am surprised that Dani did not catch on as to what Chris was trying to communicate to her.

I also enjoyed the foreshadowing about how Devin was planning to purpose, I am surprised that Dani did not catch on as to what Chris was trying to communicate to her.

I would just like to point out that the proper way to open a locked door is to kick it with your foot, near the doorknob. It is far more likely to give way, than using your shoulder. Using your shoulder will only result in a heavy bruise, while using your foot, actually gets you somewhere. Very well written other than that part.

Every chapter both you guys write are amazing.
Cant wait for more

both of your chapters are amazing ok omg

@ colorfultears
Yes but now Chris feels all bad.

Devin was so sweet to Alex :') ugh just when Chris was being nicer to her he goes back to being all demony and rude >.>

Oh my god so many emotions!! Chris should have come after dani! I can't wait to see what happens with them and everyone else!

no words can describe this... beyond perfection!