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youre ruining me (100)

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Oh my god, that was amazing! Please continue your amazing work!

January 15th, 2013 at 11:47pm

Bob de Ninja (100)

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I am here from comment swap. First and foremost, I love your layout, it's so cute. :D Anyway, onto the story. Your description is really good and I can almost picture the scenes. Also, I love how you added in flashbacks as that really gave me a background on the couple and actually got me attached to them, which is weird as I'm not a big one direction fan. The only negative is that there is a few grammatical errors but I'm not one to talk. Awesome one-shot :)

December 11th, 2012 at 09:22pm

miss crysta (100)

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Adorable.
Liam is perfect.

November 23rd, 2012 at 06:15pm

kaylelle (100)

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I love Liam so much, like I just can't express that enough.
This was adorable. Just like Liam.

November 18th, 2012 at 09:06pm

besidethesea. (100)

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This was extremely cute :)

November 18th, 2012 at 05:57am

onlythegooddieyoung (100)

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I FEEL SPECIAL THAT YOU STOPPED YOUR PROCESS OF WRITING TO READ MY UPDATES. HEH HEH.

But anyway, this one-shot was incredibly adorable. I really liked the way you interwove the flashblacks, and even though the story was short, I still got quite attached to Michelle and Liam as a couple. Their backstory was cute, too, how Eleanor introduced them. :D

Great job, chica.

November 18th, 2012 at 05:46am