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  • youre ruining me

    youre ruining me (100)

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    Oh my god, that was amazing! Please continue your amazing work!
    January 15th, 2013 at 11:47pm
  • Bob de Ninja

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    I am here from comment swap. First and foremost, I love your layout, it's so cute. :D Anyway, onto the story. Your description is really good and I can almost picture the scenes. Also, I love how you added in flashbacks as that really gave me a background on the couple and actually got me attached to them, which is weird as I'm not a big one direction fan. The only negative is that there is a few grammatical errors but I'm not one to talk. Awesome one-shot :)
    December 11th, 2012 at 09:22pm
  • miss crysta

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    Adorable.
    Liam is perfect.
    Very Happy
    November 23rd, 2012 at 06:15pm
  • kaylelle

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    I love Liam so much, like I just can't express that enough.
    This was adorable. Just like Liam.
    November 18th, 2012 at 09:06pm
  • besidethesea.

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    This was extremely cute :)
    November 18th, 2012 at 05:57am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    I FEEL SPECIAL THAT YOU STOPPED YOUR PROCESS OF WRITING TO READ MY UPDATES. HEH HEH.

    But anyway, this one-shot was incredibly adorable. I really liked the way you interwove the flashblacks, and even though the story was short, I still got quite attached to Michelle and Liam as a couple. Their backstory was cute, too, how Eleanor introduced them. :D

    Great job, chica.
    November 18th, 2012 at 05:46am
  • Dogmom92

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    Aw pop-tart love <3

    Can't wait to read this.
    October 23rd, 2012 at 04:56pm
  • Lawliet.

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    This seems really cool! Can't wait :)
    October 23rd, 2012 at 06:07am
  • Infinity and Beyond;

    Infinity and Beyond; (100)

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    I'm craving for poptarts now...
    October 23rd, 2012 at 05:22am
  • dawn of light

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    i am ready for this.
    October 23rd, 2012 at 04:02am
  • seized ships

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    Ahhhhhhhh I already love it. :)
    October 23rd, 2012 at 03:59am
  • elle me dit.

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    Two of my favorite authors on here? Can't wait!!!!
    October 23rd, 2012 at 03:33am
  • punk ariel.

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    Looks excellent so far! Subscribed, please make more soon!
    October 23rd, 2012 at 03:06am
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