Secrets in the Backseat of His Jeep - Comments

No worries, because you sound like you wrote this at night, but you have a few spelling mistakes, and why did you suddenly switch to italic? C'est tres confusing. But thanks anyway. And no worries, creativity is stifled by people bugging you to write more (trust me, I know) and I get really nervous but excited when you update, because most of the stuff I'm subscribed to is one chapter and promises a quick, painless happy ending. I want to read this, but at the same time I want you to not update because I go crazy trying to tell the characters to wake the f*ck up and smell the truth, but I can't.

First of all, I loved the chapter:D, as always, because you are an amazing author, but then again you probably know that^.^
two small things that caught my eye-
1. Somewhere in the middle the italics didn't close and the rest is in italics
2. Where you said mason's mop of hair, you accidentally wrote mom.
Other than those little things(I'm such a hypocrite right now because I always have mistakes like those lol) it was just like their weekend will be, 'freaking fantastic':D

LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gah when will you update? Soon, I hope, 'cause I'm hooked with this story!

I really hope you update this soon! I'm in love with this and the characters and you're such an amazing writer. (:

I have ESP. At the gym, randomly, I had this odd feeling I hadn't read a recent chapter.
God, I feel sorry for Mason. Well, at least he's waking the f*ck up to his feelings for Ever. Poor souls! You're a good writer, you've got all us subscribers wrapped around your finger :)

Oh my dear God. Poor Mason!

I absolutely love it!

WOW! I don't know .... just ....... shit ...... Fuck bro, this story is so good ahsjadghaiugahgwrghksjgh!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3<3<3

That was sad and sick, and then kinda cute in a fucked up way! XDAWWWWE! Update soon, kk love?

Probably one of the best chapters ajgshdkasg
Anyways, I was wondering that it'd actually be really good if you want to put the characters tab since I can't really imagine them? Just saying.

I clearly love this and since I now know who plays ever I can clearly see his cute shirt self trying to be all macho for mason Awwww, and it was sad but stuff happens love the update!

Great update! Chris Basil...your head will roll for this. Update soon!

Chris will die a slow and painful death muahha. No but seriously this was awfully sad and Ever admitting he cares but then saying it was just the drugs ajkfhksdf. You're too good of a writer for your own good. <3

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I'LL KICK THAT ASSHOLES ASS AND CASTRATE HIM!!!!!!!

Brb crying

This story is crazy, crazy good

Gah! I love it!!!!

Now Mason knows so he can talk Ever out of it:D
or fuck him out of it. Either will work.
Poor Mason and Ever though!

i think it's adorable, actually, in a way :3 Mason and Ever spending more time together, being there for each other