Love at Dusk - Comments

This story is great. Pain is spelled Pein, just to let you know. It is hard to get an Itachi story with him showing emotion because in the show until his final fight with Sasuke, he hardly says anything and is completely emotionless. This story is coming along great. Please update soon.

I quite like the plot in this story. Itachi is a little Out Of Character though, every time I see him on the show, he says no more than two words. Haha. But, nevertheless, it's well written, the paragraphs are well set up, I will continue to read this, if you continue to update.(:

Hola! Comment swapping ^_^

This is pretty interesting. I don't watch Naruto so I was a little unfamiliar with the characters but I was able to get past that. The love going on between Itachi and Kagami is adorable ^_^ Keep writing! I'm actually interested to see what happens with the couple and if they have the baby together.

Yeee first comment swapper.
Okay to be honest I'm not familiar with the fandom here. The layout shocked my poor eyes bu I've recovered. I read the first chapter and I liked it, but not knowing whom you were writing about confused me. Spelling and grama was good, paragraphs are neat. The only thing that bothered me is the very pale grey text against the orange background. Found it hard to focus, keep writing though. =)