March 31st, 2013 at 08:37pm
Oh. My. Goodness.
This story. I... It made my stomach flip, and my heart tear. You really know how to set a mood! Fantastic, and I really admire the way you set the past the present up in a cause/effect way. This was great.
Wow... I didn't realise this story had such an effect on people :) And thank-you for about the 'past present' thing, because in other stories on writing sites I've completely messed it all up and the story has been ruined :S Thankyou for the overall comment as well ^^