(Comment Swap) I love the layout first off! It's really simple and easy to read, including the nice touch of color. (Sorry it took awhile to comment, things kept coming up.) I like the story and I really would like to continue reading more! So, I hope you update again soon! :3
(Comment swap) Well I have to say, I'm not a huge Enter Shikari fan and I didn't even know that their fictions, well, existed. But this is still really good, very descriptive. The layout is clean and neat, which is always a good thing. All in all, you're deserving of the comments people are leaving :)
I hope I won't dissapoint you;) Feel free to give me some ideas or chracters. I have 9 chapters already and I think I have to add some twist in my story.
Thank you! But I have lots of shoes already...Maybe you would like to buy some?