Love is the Solution - Comments

I really like this the chapters are short and sweet and too the point.
Saying that I would love to see you go in more deal with things
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I like the story.

However, I think the first chapter is best put as the summary. But that's my personal opinion. It's your story after all. ^_^

Ahhh... I remember my days as a kid, waiting to watch Sailormoon in front of the TV. It's amazing.

I think this story is amazing. I can't really see any major grammatical errors and it's not like I'm looking for one anyway. Your descriptions are too detailed which I find it easy to read. I personally don't like stories with overly detailed descriptions. It somehow gets boring after a while. And you writing style is simple yet effective.

Good luck with this story! ^_^