March 1st, 2019 at 04:30am
I like the story.
However, I think the first chapter is best put as the summary. But that's my personal opinion. It's your story after all. ^_^
Ahhh... I remember my days as a kid, waiting to watch Sailormoon in front of the TV. It's amazing.
I think this story is amazing. I can't really see any major grammatical errors and it's not like I'm looking for one anyway. Your descriptions are too detailed which I find it easy to read. I personally don't like stories with overly detailed descriptions. It somehow gets boring after a while. And you writing style is simple yet effective.
Good luck with this story! ^_^
Saying that I would love to see you go in more deal with things
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