Okay the beginning's a lot better then I originally thought it was going to be. That's horrible to say, I know but everyone knows that the first chapter of a horror story is always bad. Yours was actually pretty good although, I thought more was going to happen then him pass out. However, I'm completely intrigued to find out what exactly made him past out. How could just a beer or so make you pass out? :P
January 31st, 2013 at 06:41pm
