It's a Mad World - Comments

Had to retread the story it'd been so long since I read it. nice update hope to read more soon

I love The Walking Dead and the cover of Mad World that Adam Lambert sang. It was so beautiful! I loved how you titled your chapters, clever!
I liked how you included actual bits and pieces from the show into your story. A bunch of seasons just came flooding back into my mind. The older sister is a strong character, and that's great. But the younger sister should get some more character development. It would be nice to see her learn to do some things on her own. But I only read to chapter three, so I'm sure you added some.

Overall this is a wonderful fanfiction.

I really like it :) keep going I cant wait for the next update!!!

I really like your story so far. Why can't Shane just leave the girl alone though. Can't wait to read more. :)

Finally caught all the way up. Love it!

I like the story so far. But I feel like the story line is going along a little too quickly. But seein as how I have seen the series. I like how it has been written

Ahhh I live this story so far but I feel like Daryl and teagan aren't really spending a lot of time together...Although I really like your chapters you mostly skip over a lot of talking parts and then It seems like you just make a whole 26 sentences go into just a tiny paragraph I hope I'm not offending you cause I really like your story!!!

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This story is usually not the type of stories I read.... In a way this story kind of confused me a little but that could just be me. Your writing style is very good and I as well did not catch any mistakes. I'm not a walking dead fan so maybe that's why I couldn't relate with the story plus it is a bit childish in a way. I hope these critiques help you with your righting and trying to sort of the things that are confusing. But other than that, like I said you are a great writer! Keep up the good work :)

I found this via comment swap. Alright, in all honesty, this did not catch my attention that much. It sounds a bit juvenile in the sense that the main girl is the tough one, and her baby sister is defenseless. But, nonetheless, I did not see any mistakes with your writing, and if I did it wasn't that big of a deal. I thought it was a good story to read.

Sometime's Merle's dialogue was hard to follow, but I love the sass you give Tia xD! Sassy characters make me pretty happy. So keep on updating darlin'!

hehehe, can't see someone like ariana grande being in an underground fight club with her role in victorious on teenick!! but love the story!

Normally I never comment on stories, but on an occasion I do, this story
Is just getting started but I am really liking it so far! Update more!
Btw I like your writing style. ;)

I like it

I like it =]
couldn't see those two actually fitting together, but for a fanfic it is pretty interesting to see opposites attract.