The Stepbrother - Comments

I feel bad for Taylor. Even tho his Master left him, gave him up, which would make Taylor think he did something wrong, Taylor is still devastated that he was deserted. Now Master Jake is back and the same as before. I wonder what plans he has for Taylor. Good update =)

I thought he was finally going to get a break, but noooo Jake's still the same

@ Tickin
then by all means, have him serve jake. =) oooh! how will jake act now that he'd lost taylor for a while? Hm? some interesting ideas come to mind. it's your story. I don't mind what you do. go nuts! lol

Lol giving me ideas and shidddd!! Lol Idk smh cause I want Taylor to serve Master Jake for a while maybe Idk yet. Imma think of something but I might just take you up on your idea.
@ AJM1

@ Tickin
haha. I really thought Blake would be tender with Taylor once he had him kidnapped. I thought Blaine would have explained to his brother that Taylor was getting raped and beaten at home and then Blake would be his savior, BUT, since I was waaaaaay off, IDK. I think Blake and Jake are good for each other. LOL let's see them battle it out to see which one gets to dominate the other. JK. I really don't know what you'll do. Both guys are crazy in the head and want Taylor, but now that Taylor is in love with both of his 'sirs and masters' it'll be hard to know what will happen. I'm sure they're talking to you in your head. Maybe neither one is good for him? You could write in another character who takes care of Taylor. I'm just rambling here. I don't know what you'll do or how this will play out, but I'm in it to the end. xx

@ AJM1
Lmaooo thanks so much. Im a fan of yours too. Smh im still reading your long chapters. I love it thou. And imma finish it thou since your a fan lol. Im neutral lol cause they both treated him wrong. I mean idk if Jake is gonna change thou since hes back but jake is sensitive so im more on his side. Blake is kinda crazy but I like it...in a way. But jake is simply a disturbed guy. Idk. Who do you prefer honestly? Lol

@ Tickin
PS, since you said it's mostly for your entertainment, I was really curious to find out where your head is at. Are you the Jake/Blake person or Taylor? Just wondering. :D

@ Tickin
You have free reign as the author of this story to do what you want to your characters, as long as it is consistent and makes sense to follow the story. I believe it's realistic and anyway, it's fantasy so I'm not gonna put it down. Write what you like, you'll still have followers and those who 'don't get it' well, there's other stories that are 'vanilla' on this site for them. To each his own. I'm a huge fan of your writing. Don't change for anyone.

@ AJM1
Lmaoooo omg. I honestly didnt think people really liked this story so I just updated it occasionally for my entertainment. Idk like I know whats next I just never really updated it. But yeah I guess I have to update now for you. Lol I kinda lost touch when I got lost and asked someone what I should do and shewas like "have him kidnapped" which I didnt mind but I do like to stay realistic and it went sorta unrealistic after that so im tryna recover things back to the point which was him and his step brother. Lol im glad you like this one too omg :))

I've been reading this for over an hour and really? you stop there? come on girl! I want to know what Jake will say, what will happen to Blake and Blaine, and of course how Taylor's personality will be eventually. Will he become himself again or stay submissive. *pulls out hair* So curious about what happens when that door opens. Great story. A little cringeworthy at times, but that's a compliment to you, that you create those emotions. xx

The story is too far from what a happens in reality. Even rapists fantasize about their victims a few times before raping them. He just got in there and fucked the poor little guy.

Awwww they've broken him :(

Haha yes! Never be afraid to ask! I can recommend plenty! Lol

@ Soleil
Oh yes! The more the better. Lol Okay. I will, if I don't find any then I know who to come to :)

Oh my gosh!! This is ridiculios!! I'm glad Blaine is trying to help him now, but if he turns out to ve lying, I'm going to be soo pissed off. Continue!!! :D

Stockholm Syndrome! XD Lol If you ever need help describing you love scenes, I suggest reading the Yaoi genre on manga sights. They might help you with it!

Stockholm Syndrome! XD Lol If you ever need help describing you love scenes, I suggest reading the Yaoi genre on manga sights. They might help you with it!

What in da fuq?! I've never been so surprised o3o

Dayummm.

Oh my gosh! I can't believe you made Blaine evil, it brings tears to my eyes. Keep writing please