Cracks in Anchors - Comments

Oh,,, Sullivan aha sigh
Mr. Styles is quite fine and i loved the chapter!!

OF COURSE YOU DESERVE A MEDAL
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Dude, I really love your writing style. It's just so beautiful and I just love this story so much I love the way you're so descriptive and Helene and her boo are awesome ok. Also, it made me crack up laughing when Harry magically appeared once mentioned, that's happened to me way more times than I'd like to admit lol. Loved the update, can't wait for the next on! :)

Awww haha loved that one

here we go....YES.

this was amazing :')

HAH SUCK IT JOLENE
she's a total asshat
omg agreeing with AHLICE that Ziall moment killed me

great chapter great ziall great single harry great you xoxo~

haha omg yes jolene gtfo nobody likes you
haha
great chapter though! update again soon?

<3 for that Ziall moment ok ok ok

gahh update soon? i will give you all of my loves if you update soon <3 ;_;

dude I fucking love you okay this story is perfect and yeah like you're perfect and yes okay that's it k bye swaggie~

omg. this is hilarious

omg that was actually so funny

Oh my God this is hilarious and amazing writing xD You don't know how hard I'm laughing at some points

HAHAHHA this is hilarious

Oof Harry... you're a teacher. You're not supposed to get erections in class! Haha I love it :P
Update again soon?

Sorry I took so long to comment! I can't believe Harry kissed her though... gah asdfghjkl;
So... she likes him, right? And did Harry mention love? hmm...
haha update again soon!

So, to plainly put it, this is amazing. I'm always skeptical of 1D fics nowadays since I've grown out of reading them and I've seen so many cliche pieces, but this was great. I know you said I didn't have to read the whole thing but I did anyway and I'm glad.

At first, I was a bit apprehensive about Sullivan and I was worried she'd just be another stereotypical loner, teenage girl but I actually really like her character. She's snarky and has a great idgaf attitude. She's not too typical or anything which I also love.

Harry, his character surprised me, in a good way. I thought he was going to be a happy go-lucky, I love teaching but also pray on high school girls teacher but he actually has depth and a real backstory.

Your writing is fabulous between the description of surroundings and feelings and your general way of writing about your characters. I just love it and while I'm not into 1D fic much anymore, I really, really enjoyed reading this.

Great!

Ahhh! Update!!