The Rules - Comments

I'm enjoying the story so far. It has unique characters and interesting plot development. Occasionally it is a little confusing who is talking sometimes so maybe some way to distinguish that would be good. Despite from that it is all round good story which I enjoyed:) Good work.

This is fab. I can't wait for you to update.

Okay, So after reading this and your other piece I've decided that your one of my favourite authors on here, Your stories are just so full of all the emotion and hardships that alot of pieces are missing these days, So with that being said I do hope you find time to update something soon c:

@ Ace Lightning.
Thank you so much~

I really like this story! Hope you update soon!

I missed this, but I'm so glad it's back. Ya know, even though I'm ripping out my hair because they're not together yet, I'm still looking forward to another chapter

Update soon, please?

@ AndThenSheBled

Same here, man. Same here.

i love this, it's so different, i want lex and roman to be together tho god damn it. and i was not expecting the whole girlfriend part lol

@ wowfairy13

Well thank you, heh. My vocabulary is only this big because I'm a huge nerd about things like languages and plants and torture.

God, you are a phenomenal writer! I hope your inspiration lasts, too. Also, your vocabulary is incredible lol I wish I knew that many words!

Yay, thank you love! You're awesome :)

@ poxleitnerd
I'm working on it now, just for you. You're lovely <3

Okay yeah you should update because it'd be torture to leave off on that...

WTF.
omg they need to get together they're perfect for eachother. ditch the BF

Ohmygosh.

That's why the header for Alexis's POV is rampallian; it means scoundrel or thief, something like that. Not to be confused with rantallion, which means a man or boy who's scrotum hangs lower than his penis.

o.O
he's got someone? o.O
oh my

Though I'm not a huge fan of slash, I gotta hand it to you, this is pretty good. I loved the racy beginning ;) I also loved the constant "the rules" thing. It makes one realize that there will be plent of drama, ha!

Great story, love. Keep it up :D

This is actually a really good first chapter! :3
I can sense some cliche bits so far but I love a good new twist on something familiar, so I totally have faith that you'll make it awesome. Alex in my mind I find so adorable, him waiting for the kiss you can so tell that he wants more than whatever they are, and I was like awwww. :c
Short but definitely sweet, Roman too seems like an interesting character, I feel like they're both holding back.
Can't wait to read more, this is great so far! <3