Daisy. - Comments

GO DAISY FOR TELLING DASH
BUT DASH OMG
SO UNDERSTANDING
TEARS HAVE BEEN SHED, LEMME TELL YOU
HE IS SUCH A SWEETIE
AND I AM SO PROUD OF DAISY
IT'S ABOUT TIME SHE LETS HERSELF OPEN UP (((((:

AERIE IS MY FAVE
GOOD CHOICE VALENTINA
ugh okay Valentina's irritating me with her playing 20 really personal questions with Daisy bc hey she just waltzed back into Daisy's life and just because she's her sister doesn't give her an excuse to commence a frick frackin police interrogation u feel???
BUT POOR DASH HE MUST BE SO CONFUSED :((((

DASH IS SO ROMANTIC GOODNESS GRACIOUS
please
i really really would like to have a Dash
oh man Valentina........
is it bad that i feel like she'll relapse? :((((

DASH IS SO CUTE UGH
I WANT A DASH
WHY CAN'T I HAVE A DASH
WHY CAN'T DASH LOVE ME UGH IM SO SAD
omg Daisy don't be a stubborn little shit what if u get worse u feel??????
aw man, if i were you, i'd tell Dash everything because i could :(((((

also: i have the fattest donut crush on him ugh

also: i have the fattest donut crush on him ugh

DASH
BABY
PLEASE LOVE ME BC ILYSM

oh my god Dash is honestly perfect
that chapter just oh my goodness
Dash you perfect sweetheart

Alright, not even gonna lie, I clicked on this story because I liked the title and the description has The Maine in it.

But omg, I got so lost in this story I don't even know what to do with myself. I felt like I was reading an amazing book, except the story stopped before it finished so I don't know how it ends.

I LOVE this. Dash is so freaking sweet and actually reminds me a lot of my boyfriend, and Daisy is so messed up but so interesting and Marina is so outspoken and awesome and I just want Daisy and Dash to be all awkward together forever.

I love how realistic this all is. You've written Daisy's personality and habits so well, and the interactions between all of your characters are so spot on and fantastic. I love all of it.

I don't even know what else to say. i'm super excited to see what happens with the rest of this. Ahhhhh. <3

VALENTINA U SUCK
WAIT
NO VALENTINA U DON'T SUCK OMFG I'M SORRY
omg Daisy
why you gotta be like this girl
why you gotta be so difficult c'mon it's Dashy Dash
DAISY YOU STOP THIS RIGHT NOW
DASH YOU SWEETHEART UGH
NO DITCH DAISY
CAN I HAVE YOU

whoaaaaaa, what is happening?! I thought they totally had sex and I was like, 'WAIT, WHY ISN'T THERE A CHAPTER ABOUT IT?!" but then it didn't happen so.. as;lkgjl;sakgjlaksjg WHAT IS HAPPENING. Where is Valentina?! What's going to happen when Dash comes back around?? GAH

QUI EST-CE QUE VALENTINA
JE SUIS TRÈS CONFUSED HOLY SHIT
maybe I forgot oh fuck I'm awful
BUT THIS STORY OH MY GOODNESS
Daisy you ball of emotions we are so alike
except I'm sure you have it worse off but you do have Dash so je suis trè jalouse
but ugh stop this right now Bee this story is far too emotional for existence

AW OMFG
I'M CRYING
AW DASH YOU SWEETIE PIE
I LOVE DASH SO MUCH
omfg
did
oh Jesus
did Marina buy Daisy lingerie omf
okay
I'm done
SHIT MARINA GIRRRRRRRRRL
I DO WANT DAISY AND DASH TO GET IT ON THOUGH I MEAN IT'S DASH C'MON WHO WOULDN'T WANNA HIT IT WITH HIM

i only just read chapter one but ohmygooodnesss i can't wait to read all these chapters later eeek i love your writing style ccccccccccc:

OH MY GOD
“If you’re looking for non-fiction, check the back,” he murmured, kissing my forehead. “Or if you’re looking for thrillers, check the middle,” he said as he pressed his lips to my cheek. “And if you’re looking for romance, you’re in the right place,” he mumbled against my lips, pulling me close.

I THINK I JUST FAINTED
THAT WAS SO FUCKIN CHEESY BUT SWEET JESUS CAN SOMEONE SAY THAT TO ME I'D ACTUALLY LOVE THAT I LOVE THAT SO MUCH I LOVE IT A LOT CAN I HAVE DASH DAISY CAN FALL IN LOVE WITH DEREK
I'M ALREADY IN LOVE WITH DASH CAN I HAVE HIM PLEASEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?!

ohhhhhhh I love the way you described the sunset I wanna see that with Dash :(((((((((((
wow I love Dash's family being an architect has always been like an inner dream for me but yenno super hard n shit
OMFG
GET IT GIRL
and how the fuck is this a filler THIS IS BEAUTIFUL I LOVED THIS UPDATE A LOT ACTUALLY
I CAN'T WAIT FOR HER TO TELL DASH BECAUSE HE'LL LOVE HER FOREVER
even though I really want him to love me forever

"He's kind of, uh, he's pretty good at it, I guess..."

EXCUSE ME DAISY
HAVE YOU SEEN DASH'S LIPS?!
IF HE'S NOT DAMN GOOD AT KISSING THEN IDK WHAT'S RIGHT AND WHAT'S WRONG IN LIFE

and oh my goodness he gave her daisies I'm about to faint
aw Dash is so sweet and he's so stubborn and it's actually precious how much he cares in such a short time like AHHHH CAN I HAVE DASH PLZ
I MEAN IF DAISY DOESN'T WANT HIM.........
I'D BE HAPPY TO TAKE HIM
and Arctic Monkeys is perf plz + thx

"I usually spent months at home between each trip, so I tried teaching myself how to do things I didn’t know how to do, like cook and sew and knit and other little things. It kept my mind off of things, and they were things that I hadn’t learned to do as a kid, and at some point I’d need to do them, so why not? Sometimes it came in handy, like with cooking."

Holy shit, I wish she and I shared things other than our names. She's like a perfect person in some ways. Even if I have nothing to do, I lay on my bed and do NOTHING instead of actually having to get up and learn to be self-sufficient. She's so lovely. I'd swoon if I knew someone as amazing as her and would instantly want to become beessst friends. :) Not because she'd be able to cook deliciously and I'd be able to come over and eat all of her amazing food or anything...

HOW DO YOU NOT LIKE DASH OF COURSE YOU LIKE DASH I MEAN IT'S DASH FOR ONE
FOR TWO IT'S DASH
FOR THREE HE'S A SWEETHEART
AND SWEET AS PUMPKIN PIE
AND ALSO ATTRACTIVE AS HELL
AND HE'S DASH OK OK THAT'S SETTLED THEn
oh my goodness they kiss
I'm about to faint

duuuude, can I just say that the lights going out scene reminds me of your story "If I'm James Dean, You're Audrey Hepburn"? I really love your writing. I can't seem to get enough of it. askgdjasl;dgkj keep it up! (:

happy to have found this!!! real cute and keeps me curious. plus that it's set in phoenix is wonderful, i live in ahwatukee! maybe you don't even know where or what that is but it's 15 minutes away from tempe and well i'll stop talking now xox

OH MY GOSH
MARINA IS A SHIPPER
SHE IS ONE OF US
I APPROVE
AWWWWW DASH YOU SWEETY STOP IT ILYSM!