Outnumbered - Comments

I really love where this is going! Update soon!

Please let Jaime be alive!!!!!! And I love this story it's amazing!!!! Pleas keep updating it!

Oh, goodness! FINALLY.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE.
PLEASE.

(sorry to bug you) but when is there going to be another update This story is amazing and i absolutely love it so far so please finish it

@ sirensandmice
right now, i've been busy with finals! very sorry for such a long wait. :/

When are we goin to get an update?

I knew there were some similarities between this and the walking dead (; but omg this is amazing. I hope they find Hayden or I'm going to cry but this is soooo good. I was hooked from the start. (:

Just found this story and I am hooked! Love the fact that Vic is playing the leader. Even though I understand Allie's point for being mad at Tony, she shouldn't repeatedly lash out against him. I mean, come on, he saved her life and if he could have he would've stopped Hayden from going into that forest. Plus, why wasn't Allie watching her more closely? It just really kind of stopped the happy family groove everyone was setting and then she decided that she wanted to go out and kill more zombies all by herself? Not necessarily a smart thing either. While she didn't get a chance to find her daughter or prove to Tony that she could actually kill zombies on her own without anyone's help, her attempts were pretty much in vain. Though I do understand the logic when it comes to your own kid. I really do hope that Jo and Hayden will be found. Alive. Now that they are at their destination I wonder what else is to happen? Can't wait to see what is to happen next. Hopefully Mike will make an appearance. Though I really do hate that he is portrayed as a dangerously bad guy in this story. I love Mike. This Mike just sounds like a monster.... Anywho, you are an amazing writer. You gave me inspiration to write right this very moment actually. Update soon please (:

allie pissed me the fuck off...sorry but she was being really annoying. she didn't have to play a maytr it was quite unnecessary. but what surprised me was tony didn't go after her. oh well! let's see what happens next!

okay okay...let's see...i'm sure hayden will be found, i mean, why wouldn't she? the question is...alive or dead? if she were alive it wouldn't leave quite as much drama for the story which could be good or detrimental to your plot...you want to give the readers excitement and that unpredictable nature of yours but at the same time...it is YOUR story. you should do what you want! (: if hayden dies, that will leave plenty of good emotional drama to help the story progress! tensions between her and vic, it might even lead her to tony, i don't know. allie can be mad at tony, as a mother she had the overwhelming urge to protect her child and of course nothing else in life matters more than the child...but tony was protecting her, he was going with his instincts and taking care of her. i don't know...these are my answers to your questions! i won't tell you how to write your story, because i hate when readers do that to me, so do what feels right for your story! (: but i won't be mad if hayden dies. it will be really fucking sad and nothing good comes from a child dying, it's almost inhumane, but for story purposes, authors can do it. so you do what feels right! (:

Yes she will be found no she does not have a right to be mad at him and whatever you want to happen is what I want to happen (as long a u dnt like kill Hayden or something like that) and other than that I love this story it's really good

Omg this is amazing!!!!! (:

The kid is better to be alive. And yeah, love it. Almost pissed myself reading. Fucking awesome dude. You are a propa amazing writer.

ahhh this is such a great story! im hooked

this is like the best zombie apocalypse story ever :D

@ ptvlov3
holy crap! I'm so sorry. xD Thanks for reading it...didn't mean to give you a nightmare! xD

This is a great fic! It fit in with my whole zombie themed day, I'm glad I found it :D

so i read this before i went to bed and then in my dream everyone was zombies and we had to kill them like in the story and tony was our partner but they got him on a roller coaster...crazy shit. dont read zombie fanfic before bed lol

I'm going to cry. Please don't kill Hayden </3