It's Getting Kinda Crazy What I'm Willing to Lose - Comments

Another good chapter. Two so close together! I think hell might be freezing over. I was kinda sad that Cherry just fell right back to it. And i liked seeing all of Jack's thoughts. It was a good chapter. More soon?

I liked this chapter. Its kinda tough for me cuz i kno what happens you kno. But this was good. Emotional and suspenceful. Really good job. Im kind of curious to see Adams pov on this one you kno. :) more soon?

So is cherry going to be a perm character? I liked this chapter but I don't know if I felt like it lead to him going to Sophie and Adam. Like it seemed an awful lot like I wanted him to go on and live happily ever after with Cherry. Not the Sid and nancy way tho haha. Good chapter babe :)

It didn't suck! It was a good chapter. i liked when he was singing to her, adn i'm happy her family accepts him so completely. I love it. It was a good filler and it was sweet. :) This story is always so heavy it was nice to have a break and just see them all getting along and being happy. and Mike needs to lay off of her lol ;)

I'm not sure how i feel abt this one. his emotions were there but closed off. and i wasn't really sure why he was so pissy with everybody. it didn't really explain how he felt abt Sophie coming out either just how he felt about her. it just didn't flow well. but the song you wrote was cool lol. i dug it. the chapter was good in its way. sorry my comment is so mean i feel bad :( but i wanted to be honest. it wasn't your best work. but we all have chapters like that sometimes. :) i love you.

This one was good. i love your jack chapters so much. they are so emotionally charged. and i really like the addition of his story. in the original we didn't get all that you know. its a great chapter babes. i love it.

As usual u are amazing. i have to be selfish and say it took me back to the detox scene in Save Me. at least Adam has Sophie who is clear headed and well adjusted to handle the crisis. i loved this chapter in the original. i was thinking about it while i read it. you have come such a long way since back then babe. your work is much more detailed and emotional. this story is beautiful and powerful. this chapter was amazing. i could see it all and feel it all happening. it was amazing. i think I've used that word too many times now haha. but really i loved it. I'm glad she could tell him she loves him. I'm so happy they have each other. its so perfect. :) amazing job baby. really truly amazing job

You've gotten so much better at sex scenes, inlaw. :P ur original ones weren't that much fun. hehe. I always feel awkward writing about sex....anyways! it was a good chapter for a filler chapter. I'm glad he still loves her, but i'm kind of sad she doesn't love him back yet :P i know its coming but still. lol. I really love this story....but i have to say i'm a little sad i wont be in it like the original. ;-) (yes that winkie is meant to be creepy) i remember the good old days of writing stuff with no purpose just cuz lol!!! nobody got time for that anymore. okay i'm sorry, i'm ranting. this was a great little filler. i can't wait for the next chapter....i kinda think i might know what's coming.

Fuck! this is my 3rd try at this comment hopefully my phone doesn't throw me offline this time.

anyways. i really liked this chapter. it was kinda funny with adam all drunk like an ass lol. his parents fucking suck man. but i remember that from the original. good job babe

This was great. a little short but great. idr any baby in the original story haha. i hate that girl. she did nothing but fuck him up by being there. now he's going to be in even deeper shit man. but it was great. i liked it. more soon!!

It was great! I would have liked to have seen Adams talk with Shawn, because i think it would have been a strong point for him. but i really enjoyed the chapter. it was great watching him figure out what's up with Sophie and I'm glad they are together again. great job babe. I'm reading in the movie theater before the movie starts like a bad person. lol :) ily!!

Wtf. id have told Shawn to fuck himself with a stick dude.that was fucking fucked up. she helped adam. she was what adam needed. what a bunch of shit. her dad is awesome haha. he was on fire ;-) good chapter babe i loved it :)

I can't tell you how much i love this story. The emotions are always on key. I could see him standing in the dark with the dealer wondering where Sophie was. I could feel his emotions and his feelings of giving up and just wanting to please himself. i could see it and feel it. And i hated that girl Vivian for trying to take him back there. I love the relationship between adam and sophie. it's so realistic. I love this story so much i'm so glad you decided to redo it. :) update again soon.

This was another great chapter. i love this story. its always so perfectly written and emotional. i could feel how angry and hurt he was. i could see him finding out she was cheating. i loved it so much this story is great.

This was a super good chapter as far as writing and emotional movement and stuff. it made me think about what shes feeling and i really enjoyed the part with her and sloan. did u come up with those lyrics on your own? It was a really good chapter. i really enjoy reading this revamp. its amazing. ur so incredibly talented. i love you!! :)

Both chapters were good. I love that Adam wanted to keep an eye on her and that he's starting to have feelings for her and stuff. and i really enjoyed seeing Sophies pov there a little just to see how she's feeling. good job babe :) more soon!

I'll have you know that i'm supposed to be doing math homework now, and risk getting in super trouble for using the school computer for this. I'm lucky this site isn't blocked! :P

But aside from that! the chapter was great! emotional and overwhelming and great. i could really feel how angry John was and how upset Sophie was and i could see it all happening like a movie. it was amazing. I can't get over how much you've grown as a writer. the original wasn't nearly this emotional and deep and detailed you know. this is a great story. i love seeing all the backstory play out and stuff rather than hear about it in retrospect. Good job baby. :) i love it.

It was great. I'm curious to see how it moves from here now with Adam living somewhere else and it being so much more difficult for them to you know, hook up or whatever. I was really wanting to know what Sophie was thinking in this one. thats one of the reasons i dislike first person so much. She seems to be so torn about the whole thing, and i'd just really like to see her perspective on it you know. It was a great chapter! i loved it :D and i'm glad Adam is staying away from this past he seems to hate so much you know. it was a great chapter, i can't wait for Sophie's! :) good job babe. This story is always so much like a book. :) more soon???

Your chapters with Jack are always amazing. his character really like shows off how talented you are as a writer. at one point during this chapter i literally forgot i was reading something my friend wrote on mibba. it was as if i was reading an ebook or something. not to say your chapters of adam and sophie aren't good, cuz they r. but i think the jack chapters have more depth or something. idk. it was an amazing chapter though. it sux he got arrested :( but i guess it was probably a good thing. great job babe i can not wait for more :)

It was a good one :) i love all the different perspectives. it was a good chapter :)