Blackmail Material - Comments

*Comment Swap* hi! I loved this, the brothers are so sweet!! It would be nice to know what had happened. Maybe you could put that in another chapter? I really hope you consider doing more because your writing is great. There were no granmar mistakes (but I wasn't looking) but I do feel sometimes your sentences were a bit too long. I really think this is really sweet, but it would be great if you could add more and explain what happened to Tom.

I’m really curious about what would happen between those two, and what’s wrong with Tom? But the way Oli shows his affection to Tom is cute. I wish he was my brother lol. Write more pleaseeeee… btw just a little input from me, I think it’ll be better if you edit the layout and make it more interesting.

This is an okay chapter, given it would've been better if there was a bit more clarity about what happened. But I suppose that was to get more comments on it? I would get a more eye catching layout if I were you, but other than that. It didn't seem too bad, honestly.

I really, really need to know what happened. There's no where near enough good BMTH stories around, and this is amazing, so please, please PLEASE write more! =D

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I would like to know what happened... Lol

This is definitely something I wasn't expecting. Thought maybe it would've turned out differently! Anyway, I'm excited for more. Update again soon! xx

This is very suspenseful! I can't wait for more! I really do like the brotherly thing they got going but at times it seems like more? If that's not the direction you're going then you might want to go through it again, but it's whatever. :) Very good!

Holy mofo! What's happened? You left this chapter with so much suspense in it, I am not amused xD Updating is essential, let us know!

I love how brotherly they are and how close they are. It's good to know that Tom has that much support, particularly in his time of need!

I hope that he's OK though , and that nothing too bad has happened!

I think this is a really fun idea! You should definitely continue it because it would be interesting to see what the paparazzi do with the photographs of them cuddling. I could just see them being plastered all over magazines and things!

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I think you should really update this because I don't admit this very often but I actually really want another chapter to find out what happens next. But I think you need a layout, I'm not too picky about them but I think it'd be a great idea to paint a little picture about the story. Good job and goodluck with it.