*Comment Swap* hi! I loved this, the brothers are so sweet!! It would be nice to know what had happened. Maybe you could put that in another chapter? I really hope you consider doing more because your writing is great. There were no granmar mistakes (but I wasn't looking) but I do feel sometimes your sentences were a bit too long. I really think this is really sweet, but it would be great if you could add more and explain what happened to Tom.
November 16th, 2013 at 03:42pm