Across Time - Comments

  • heretic.

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    Holy shit, this was amazing. Like, woah!
    Brilliant idea and plot. Beautifully written. I'm kinda speechless. Wow.. this would make a pretty epic story.
    Loved it!
    June 8th, 2013 at 05:33pm
  • early_graves

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    That was so beautifully written. Celine's story is amazing and it's great that she was able to pull through it. I assume that the story is set in the future and I can really put myself in Celine's shoes. But anyways, this story was amazing and I love it.
    Thank you for entering my contest!
    March 3rd, 2013 at 07:45pm
  • Quoth Raven

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    I'm so sad that it's over! I wish it could continue, I want to know what happens! There has to be some way she can go back there and find him! I loved this, sadness because it's over...
    October 31st, 2012 at 06:19pm
  • Terry1491

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    That was....hdloakjglkjsoitjksjdt. I don't even know what to say. Well written, awesome plot...it was just pure AWESOMENESS!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!
    October 31st, 2012 at 07:46am