Beast and the Harlot - Comments

I love it and I was like wtf happened to Brian hes such a fucking bitch!!
holy shit.. tho I love it..

@ StacieIerogeance
I can tell you now, that the mean abusive Brian will be in it a lot. And it has nothing to do with Jimmy... well not all of it. It's just the way Brian is. This is Brian's true nature to relationships, all because of his ex, the vampire who he killed. This fanfic will not have a happy ending. But there will be a sequal to bring it to a balance. I just have to finish this one first!

so i think I see why brian is being the wa y he is...kinda.....i dont know i just dont like him being mean to zack but if he wants jimmy made he is being the way he is to zack so he can be with jimmy. I dont know im like brian so indecisive about where you are going with brian being controlling and abusive

Brian is so indecisive!

Brian is so confused about Zacky and Jimmy!!! Poor bri :(

Boy, you are all gonna hate me...

Brian loves him...of course he does, he has to lol i think Brian had bad intentions but will end up doing right by Zack cause he loves him :)

I knew brian drugged him and then it was like oh wait twist again can't wait for more

Well... That did not go as I expected... Zacky... You kinky little bastard. ;)

uh oh brian drugged him :( cant wait for more!!

<3 I love it all!!!! your such a great write and I cant wait to read more!!! :)

Ha I have a feeling I know what brian did.

@ StacieIerogeance
I shall update this today! just trying to get some ideas after a few super crazy days!

I still think Zack is the Beast because he is making brian do things he doesnt want to do.

WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! did not except that at all.

loving this. so Zacky is a vampire, does that mean he is the beast? cant wait to read more!!

Wow I love it so much..!! one of my favorite stories here...
and I think that well I have alot of stuff to tell you bout beast and the harlot..
1.I find that Bri is the Beast because well he acts like a beast around Zee...
2.I find Zee is the Harlot because he leads people to him like brian..
and then I find that.
1.Zack is the beast because he acts like a beast around Brian..
2. Brian is the Harlot because like he said "what if I were your soul mate" like he is leading Zee into him... xDD anyways I love it alot.

I think Brian is the beast just because of the way he is acting and Zack is the harlot because he is trying to lure brian in. Also I didnt think that they were gonna try to kill zack off that shocked me and i felt bad reading about brian's past and why he doesnt like to strip any more

1. I am loving this so far, this is absolutely awesome. I cant wait for more!!
2. So far, for some reason I am thinking that Zack is the beast and Brian is the Harlot. the reason i think Brian is the Harlot is because there is just something about him and he gets to people. and the fact that Brian Sr does too makes me think its something they both have.
I am probably way off base but anyway haha

To everyone that has commented, I am going to ask you to do my a favor;
Comment back and tell me who you think is the Beast and who you think is the Harlot. And explain your reasons for each.
I will ask you this again in a few chapters to see if your thoughts have changed...
I have some major ideas for this and some curveballs.