This story is a stunning masterpiece. With the descriptions and just the feel of the story, how you can feel the darkness radiating off it yet it's so amazingly beautiful. I hope this goes far on this site because it deserves it!
This is truly amazing. So much so it makes me feel like an inadeuquate writer. I love Sawyer, and I love Aubrey. All these characters are so great, so perfectly executed. Out of all the original stories on this site, this defintely deserves a LOT more. It's perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Two things. First, I’m completely and deeply in love with this story and addicted beyond belief.. and second, this really, really puts my NaNo novel to shame. Leaves it behind to cry in the cloud of dust, it does. Not going to lie.
Very deep story. This story definitely has more of an inner meaning. I understand most because my best friend wrote this. You definitely have a gift! Great story!
I am so in love with this story, puts my nanowrimo to shame! I really can't wait to see where it goes and wish you luck in finishing it, I know how scary and stressful it can be!
hmm so there is much i could say about this. this has amased me. it makes me want to cry and jump into the story myself. i am usally picky about what i read and this is written so much like a story i would read i just love it. i want to read much much more.
Oh my goodness gracious! This is probably one of the most beautifully written stories I've read on here. This just captures my heart and I am anxiously waiting for the rest of this beautifully woven tale. Please continue!
This is absolutely fantastic. Really... I wish I could come up with a more articulate way of saying that but it truly is. The way you describe your characters is just so ethereal and beautiful, and your descriptions are just haunting. I love that she's thinking of Sawyer, and that they have a connection without actually talking. It makes your story very different to other romances and that's one of the things that makes your story so special.
I don't know what else to say... I'm supposed to be writing my own NaNo story right now. But good luck finishing this story and I'll be waiting to find out what happens between Aubrey and Sawyer. ^_^
Oh, I really like this. It's kind of haunting, but beautiful. The way you've portrayed Aubrey is quite enchanting. I like her thought process and I find Sawyer to be intriguing. I look forward to seeing where you take this. :)