Mine - Comments

AW Brian needs to get her back!

I know what you can do Brian!

GET HER BACK!!!!!!!She confessed her love for you,so you should go after her!!!

omg I love it.

Brian!!! she just confessed to you that she wants more...that you two would be perfect...well in "another universe" but still...you could have just kissed her.. idiot....i'm sure she would be willing to be his slave....maybe they could compromise....he has feelings for her!!!!! yay!! love love love this!!!!

Oh Brian, why must you be so dumb! He should have told her the truth, i'm sure she could handle being his "slave". Damn that would be awesome...lol. I love this story so much! I cant wait for more! Have a Merry Christmas!!!:D

This was a great chapter, so much contrast of emotions, delicious sexy time! He should've kissed her!! I'm super excited to see what happens in the next chapter, I can't wait to see how she does things with Vincent and how Brian takes everything.

Omfg I freaking love this story and I can't wait to see what Brian does in the next chapter. I hope he makes things right. Update soonest!

Brian you're a dumb jerk -__- here she said she feels about you and you feel the same and you say you can't?? I hope you can work things out with her and hope the Vincent guy turns tu be a jerk so she leaves him and Brian can make her go back to him :) Update soon :D

Brian really messed up here..he should have told her how he really feels about her. Here Noelia confessed to Brian her desire for them to be in a relationship and Brian tells her they can't :( He might have lost for good now..hopefully he work things out with Noelia
Great update:)

:( She really is in love with him. Brian may have lost her for good. Unless this Vincent dude turns out to be something really special.

<3 Michele

loooooove this :D it was hot :D update soon!!!

Loved this. Looking forward to more soon.

Holy crap girl that ish was hot! And a new love interest? ! Cute! Cant wait for the next one :)

holy moly that was hot hot hot hot hot.
damn holy moly.
i wonder what brian is going to say when she tells him about vincent hmmm.
update again soon :D

Loved it, cant wait for more.

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I'm spechless, sorry.
update soon, that's all I ask for

.....oh my damn!

Oh boy, that was lovely! I would love to know what Brian is thinking. I just have this feeling that he is feeling the same as her and won't take it all that well when she wants to call it off.
<3 Michele

wow. hot hot hot!..cant wait to see what Brian has to say about her coworker cus Im sure he will find out. More soon please!

fantastic!! can't wait to read more.... :p