This is incredible. Really. I haven't read a storyline/one shot like this in a while and i'm just here crying.
“You are my sunshine, my only sunshine… You make me happy when skies are gray… You’ll never know just how much I love you… Please God, don’t take my sunshine away…” the last part was begged through his tears."
That had to be one of the greatest parts. There are stories that don't actually have something so heart breaking and just so heart warming as this. As soon as I read those words knowing he was singing that, he was just breaking down, I just... it's like I felt how he felt. It's actually taking me time right now to type this cause my eyes are just pouring right now.
This was so heart-warming and heart-breaking at the same time. I actually cried at the end of reading this when she died. You did a magnificent job on this and I love how you branched off with the photo idea. They were only married for three years yet you could see how much they loved each other and it is heart shattering for Matt to lose the love of his life so quickly. I loved every second of reading this. <3
I was not expecting to read something like that. :( That was so sad, and now my heart's broken. It was so beautiful though. They were so sweet and in love, and then she wanted to fight it because she wasn't ready to leave him. I'm crying all over again just thinking about it. I liked that they managed to make some happy memories before she died though. The first half was so cute. This definitely my favorite thing you've written just so you know.
Goddamn, that made me blubber like a baby. The moment was so beautifully innocent, like two little kids seeing their first snow, and then it was ruined, like a big bully who had come to destroy their snowman, by that. Heart-wreckingly beautiful. Ugh, I hate this kinds of stories, because I hate sad endings, but the sad ending is why I read it. I'm such a masochist.