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love this, is there a squeal?

Whoa! Helicopter parents all the way, huh?

Oh snap, she took the ring off! Stuff's about to go down now!

This was the perfect combination of hot and sweet. You can tell Matt's a good guy from the way he kept apologizing for what happened in the elevator and how he helped her with her key when her hands were full.

Then when he found out she was a virgin, he went out of his way to make her first time special, which I'm sure is a rare find in most guys. It's so refreshing to read about a gentle, caring Matt especially with a character like Dani. They were beautiful together, and I'm so glad she went against what her parents wanted to free herself in the end.

Very nicely done.

This was an awesomely well written one-shot. I loved it and I found the story refreshing because it wasn’t the typical story plot.

Great oneshot, I absolutely loved it! :)

stop, just stop with the whole writing things that make everyone of us jealous. It's not healthy to be this jealous of a fictional character lol

They was absolutely amazing and i missed your writing so much. This satisfied my hunger for your stories... well for now anyway. You know how much of a fan i am of your writing. As always, incredibly well done love c:

I love that there was a Mae West quote in the summary. She's one of those actresses that I love. As for the story, I loved it. I loved Daniella, her personality and her background. I liked the fact that she was a 23 year old virgin and wasn't in a hurry to toss that away. It's rare to see that, and the whole time I read this I found myself wondering if she'd really go through with it or not, but I'm glad she did since she finally got her freedom she longed for. Matt was perfect. I thought he was too cute when he got nervous while trying to apologize to her, and I love that he wasn't cocky both times he was about to get laid. The plot was great as well. I just loved it! Fantastic as always! :)

amazing!

This is absoultely wonderful. I love this along with all of your amazing work. It was so cute that Matt was Danielle's first time. It would be awesome if you were to do a sequel yet this one-shot ended perfectly. <3

Wow, I cant even begin to tell you just how good this was! it flowed perfectly and I totally got pulled into the whole thing. Well done! Could you imagine having him for your first time! gawd, I girl could only dream! Puts my first experience to shame...lol. And I laughed at the "Horsecock" cameo:P lol. I loved this!!! you should expand on it.

please do a sequel.this was amazing

I think you should do a sequel where they get together. You could include the drama of he strict and controlling parents and her fight to be free with Matt. Please say you'll think about it.

This was seriously soooo good!! Matt's just so sweet! So good that I think you should make a sequel short story or a longer one <3

Loved it you should write a one shot sequel for them in the future

That was so good!!