I really like this so far- all of your stories seem to have such intricate plot lines and really realistic, especially when they're mystery ones! This one is quite different, and I like how you've told it all from the point of the prisoner rather than those outside of the prison who are watching it happen. Good job!
It's kinda sad that everything's over with Val but she made her bed when she slept with another guy, and Matt's right that he can start with a clean slate when he gets out.
I had to laugh at him going over to Tiny and asking him to hit him. That's definitely one way to get to see Fiona lol
aawh i hope that lawyer knows what he's doin even if he sounds like a little bitch. heheheh yay bri came to visit though, awesome brutus..didn't really sound like killing his best friend was a big deal O.o
Ooh Jesus wants Matt to find out who killed Felipe.. Dunno if that's good or bad.. The whole- now ppl know who you are thing- could be both good and bad for him though..
aawh they don't care who killed him? that sucks.. heheheh matt shouldn't have punched the little guy.. lmao! but it was funny either way callin' matt a fairy.. jeez he totally deserved being knocked out can't wait to see what'll happen when he gets out of the docs..
wah shit!! someone killed matt's cell-mate!! well it wasn't he though!! but something tells me that he's the one that's going down for it love all the details you've got, esp. how bad the food is.. poor matt!!
i'm lovin this already.. talk about being at the wrong place at the wrong time totally like all the details of when he was admitted(?) and that stuff.. his cell-mate seem weird.. ross was nice enough to let him in on how things work around the prison and jesus.. well.. i really got a bad feeling about him, not so weird since he kinda runs the place according to ross.. can't wait for more