I don't usually read Zacky Vengence stories (I don't know much about the band even though I've actually been wanting to give them a listen ), so I can't really say that I think you're portraying him right or anything. Haha, sorry. I do, however, think that your writing is great! There's a nice flow to the sentences, you've got a good vocabulary, the chapters really capture the reader's attention, and the plot also has some potential! :) Overall this is really good! :)
still say she sould have given that other speech lol even if i dont know all of what was in it :P uh oh brian didnt know she was going to NYU..... looove this
I'm glad she changed her speech. I'm also glad she and Zacky are on speaking terms again. Looks like Brian's not thrilled about her going to New York. Can't wait for the next update
Mel just needs to kick patricia's ass and get it over with. Man, she's irritating. And Matt, why you have to be so hurtfulllllll????? Dang right, you should have apologized.
yaya an update XD im glad she forgave matt but all those kids at school can fuckin suck it lol glad she punched Patricia ( even if that is my name too lol) hope people stop believeing the stupid rumor/ article and blake gets fired from that job thingy he was workign on