I Know The Way You've Been Living - Comments

  • CrazyPebbles21

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    @ AJ9
    I think so too, Like with Brian and Mel or all the guys
    January 11th, 2013 at 06:16pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I still feel like Blake's up to something
    Update soon please
    I just hope Brian and her gets together :)
    Great chapter
    I knew her mom would be okay with her going to NYU
    Can't wait to find out
    January 11th, 2013 at 06:14pm
  • AJ9

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    Hmmm ..... Blake is pretty laid back about her going to NYU isn't he? What is he hiding? I think Mel needs to prepare herself for some drama involving Blake. I have a suspicion that this project he's working on has something to do with A7X. Please update soon. Oh, and 'yes please' to the sequel!
    January 11th, 2013 at 05:18pm
  • SynxDeepxInxYour

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    I don't trust Blake. At all. Would rather see Mel and Brian together (: love!!!! Can't wait till the update :)
    January 11th, 2013 at 04:32pm
  • MikeyWhiskeyHands

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    more...plz Smile
    January 3rd, 2013 at 09:38am
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    I just got caught up with this whole thing, you just cant end it like that on such a cliff hanger there needs to be more dude, please..

    Though I feel I should let you know while reading this I did notice some mistakes here and there nothing super bad a few things I'd have to read more then once but it didn't take away to much from the story.

    I like your layout I think its very pretty.

    I like the story, I like how you don't have them sneaking around and just fucking, I think that is probably one of my fave aspects of this story.

    Length wise I think for the most part a lot of you chapters where very well done while a few of them where a tad short, but still most where at that perfect length and I love that...

    Another tip is you don't have to keep letting us know who's POV with you putting the dividers in the reader should be able to easily tell when you've switched to a new person.

    Again these are just some thoughts and tips, I hope you've had a lovely Holiday.

    Much <3 Kat
    December 27th, 2012 at 01:44pm
  • Music2Addict

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    you have to do a sequel!
    December 26th, 2012 at 03:31pm
  • BeeSmart

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    DEFINITELY A SEQUEL !!!:-)
    December 21st, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • strawberrybubble

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    Make Sequel! I Like Sequels ♥
    December 21st, 2012 at 07:27pm
  • RazzyVengeance6661

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    I think you should make a sequel! i love this story and want to see where it goes!
    December 21st, 2012 at 07:12pm
  • A7X-PapaRoachLvr

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    Loved!!

    You should definitely make a sequel!!
    December 21st, 2012 at 06:30pm
  • AJ9

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    Brilliant chapter! Fantastic!!

    Sequel, sequel - please!! Clap

    Update as soon as you can and Merry Christmas! Cool
    December 21st, 2012 at 04:28pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Great chapter
    Update soon
    Can't wait to find out what happens
    December 21st, 2012 at 11:45am
  • Avenge_My_Death

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    I'm now convinced that this story is magic! I was reading as I was sitting outside of the factory where my fiance works waiting to pick him up...I was like oh god no! Not Brian! Once I was done reading it I look out my car window to see that it is now snowing for the fist time this winter! I'm tellin ya its freakin magic! Update again before christmas and maybe I'll have a white one lol! Also I wanted to say what a great chapter that was and how I have enjoyed this story so far. Keep it up!
    December 21st, 2012 at 04:58am
  • RandaRue22

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    I agree with AJ9, Blake is way to clingy, he needs to go! I can't wait for you to update again!
    December 20th, 2012 at 11:20pm
  • gothique4

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    oh no - I hope that Brian hasn't done anything stupid. Thank god that they found him in time!

    Now hopefully that she's realized that she loves him she can kick that douche Blake to the curb
    December 20th, 2012 at 10:51pm
  • A7X-PapaRoachLvr

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    AHH!! I hope Brian will be okay. Update soon!
    December 20th, 2012 at 09:09pm
  • helena_88

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    oh shit now this story really got me on edge!!
    i don't like blake, it feels like he's gathering inside info about the guys now that he is close to them, and that he'll have a field trip with this thing with brian..
    and oh my gosh!! i hope he's okay!
    December 20th, 2012 at 08:19pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Great chapter
    Update soon
    Where was Zacky at?
    Blake needs to go
    I hope Brian is okay
    Can't wait to find out what happen
    December 20th, 2012 at 07:42pm
  • AJ9

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    I loved this chapter, so full of drama. Please make Brian be ok. Blake's getting on my nerves and he's too clingy. I hope he disappears - mysteriously - *muahaha*!!

    Please update as soon as you can Cool
    December 20th, 2012 at 06:45pm