And They Call Her Cinderella - Comments

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god, i love them. i don't know what it is about the couple, but they just fit, and you write them beautifully. even while they're still just beginning. i don't know how to explain it. you just have them completely pinpointed. i'm hoping for more scenes in the classroom, though. c:

*screeeeech*
this is so great and perfect and right.
Just that little bit at the end where Arthur's waiting to hear from Eames, and Eames is waiting to call and hoping Arthur'll be the first to make the move and all of their character traits, unnnngh.
Brilliant. c:

As always, I loved it, Aleka. This is by far one of my favorite stories ever and probably my very favorite of all your work. I can tell you put a lot of love into each chapter and I know that you're really proud of it, as you should be. I love the full loop you made from earlier mentions of Eames stopping in front of the shelf to the latest update when that actually happened. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm so glad that this is being written. They are my dream husbands, and as many fics as there are out there, they hardly ever pop up on mibba, so bless you.
I like the style, and the spot-on characterizations, and the mystery. Cannot wait.

Fantastic! This reminds me sort of the way Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is written. I simply love it! Please continue!

Magnificent, darling! I can tell you're really putting your time into this story. And I kind of love not knowing anything about it. My favorite bit was the end with the allusion to the first chapter and also the bit near the middleish with the peeks at what happens between them later in the night.

I love it, darling. I think the new ending to the prologue works much better and adds a new... dimension? Hm. More emotion, perhaps. I love the notes in parenthesis. It's a tool I've seen used before and I always adore it. Especially when they're little peeks at the future that make me smile. You could build an entire relationship with just those notes. Keep it up! :D