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  • Obsessive Writing

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    @ discoveringclouds Glad you liked it, and thanks for your advice :) I'll try and keep that in mind whenever I decide to make it better.
    March 13th, 2013 at 01:14am
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    hahaha...nice story. You should diffintely put in more details so you can use the surroundings to enhance your story. Especially when she gets to school, mentioning the teacher would be good.
    March 12th, 2013 at 10:19pm
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