I hate how much I love this story. Ugh, I've been where she is!!!!!!!! Louis is showing ALL the signs of liking her. A guy literally asking her to cheer for him, root for him, and give him positive attention is a red flag for "even if I don't know if I like you in that way, I still want you around and want you to like me...maybe in that way" which means DEFINITELY in that way. Gr!! I know she doesn't see it yet and I want to warn her, even though she's just a fictional character. This is why I hate how much I love this, because it's making me want to do the impossible. Hahaha xD
But seriously, this is fantastic and I can't wait for more. Harry was so warm and genuine. I feel like he'll slowly develop feelings for her, but Louis will have realized that he's got feelings himself and make it known before Harry knows what's going on in his own heart.
Also, I wonder how the title will play into this story. Who is wishing for any other heart. Will it be that Louis will admit his feelings, and she'll think any other heart could be yours in a second but you know mine belongs to Harry? Or will it be just that the guys can have any other heart, so why would they both fall for her, kinda thing? I love dissecting metaphors!!
Thank you for sharing this! :D Sorry if my comment doesn't make much sense, I'm quite tired. xD
Aww I'm really hoping that Harry kind of likes her and he's not just being friendly to her because he's just a nice boy. They have cute little moments.
AGH. OKAY. THIS IS GOOD. PROGRESS (I THINK) IS BEING MADE. louis better not make a move or i will kill him. this is all hazza and mia. it HASSSSSSSSS TO BE. amazing as always, xx
oh Louis definitely likes her. I really wanted them to just be mates, but you can't always get what you want, eh? I have a feeling that Harry has another lady that he's talking to and he flirts with Mia but doesn't actually like her in that way. What a bummer. :( BUT! I do love me a good Louis lovin'! I feel like I just can't get enough of him! :D
...then again, Harry could actually be into Mia. He was sooo sweet before. Nothing a friend wouldn't do though. Same with Louis! Ugh!! You know what'd be funny? A surprise ending where she gets paired off with Niall or something! Hahha!
Anyway, I really enjoyed the update and can't wait for more! :)