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  • incandescent;

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    This story hits me right in the feels :(( This is so adorable and sweet and I really liked it. I loved that fact that it's in a guy's POV because it makes it different... and refreshing. I can just imagine Niall trying to ask the girl out and it's just :(( adorable. Even if he is nervous and shizz. It would have been better if there were more descriptions added but it's still a very good read. :)
    May 5th, 2013 at 03:21pm
  • cdicaprio

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    CAN YOU SEE MY FACE RIGHT NOW??? Probably not, but let me tell ya I don't think this grin is coming off anytime soon Mr. Green
    Absolutely adorable. Hope you update soon.
    April 9th, 2013 at 10:41pm
  • harley is awkward.

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    um I loved it!
    February 22nd, 2013 at 07:11am
  • Diiggeehh

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    Omg I am completely in LOVE with this one-shot! I'm so sorry it took me so long to comment and recommend it, but I finally did it, and it's amazing. I thought it was so cute how Niall was so shy in asking her out. I pictured this whole thing perfectly, and it was very well written. I adored this, you did an amazing job :] <3
    November 22nd, 2012 at 05:22am
  • Mogar.

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    Aw, this was amazing. So cute. I literally laughed out loud a few times, which earned me weird looks from my mom and her boyfriend in the kitchen, But I don't care. It was really great. Good job ♥
    November 12th, 2012 at 01:56am
  • dmbbmb123

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    wow this is a really great story, the writing style, the plot, the characters,the themes and overall it's just really cute and sweet...please update cant wait for more :D
    November 11th, 2012 at 10:23am
  • wishful;

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    Dear lord....2000 words of lovely Niall Horan attempting to ask someone out. This is too cute! I loved anxious and worried Niall! Perfect :)
    November 11th, 2012 at 10:04am
  • Juno

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    awww.
    niall is so cute when he's nervous.
    this was really good.
    November 11th, 2012 at 05:05am
  • GoodGirl;

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    Gaah!! This is just too adorable!! I LOVE IT!! It's just.. gorgeous!! I LOVE IT!!
    November 11th, 2012 at 03:00am
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