Stay Alive Tonight - Comments

@ Where's Your Heart?
Why thank you! And yeah, the first two or so chapters were actually multiple chapters squashed into one since I was uploading it to here and wattpad from Ficwad and didn't want to go through that much. But the future chapters are actually pretty short in comparison. Usually a thousand or so words or less.

I think this story is really great.. It takes a while to get through the chapters! Maybe try breaking them up a bit?

Otherwise I like it so far!