Your writing is amazing. I can feel how hurt she was...i know how she feels (basically the same thing happened to me) and you did great writing out her smotions. I can already tell this story is going to be amazing. I can't wait to see what happens between her and Mike. I'm a big Mike fan :p haha. Can't wait til your next update :)
@ SharperThanWeapons Thank you! & Her name Is Lil. It's short for something. I thought I had said it in the beginning! Maybe not. But yes, Lil is very interesting. I have a lot of ideas for this! ^.^