Young Hallow's Eve - Comments

@ Jultje
Thank you, I hope to write more (and revise).

You did a great job on writing this story. It was interesting and kept my attention the whole way through. The descriptions were so good I could actually smell the woods and leaves and all! Not that your background didn't help a little ;) All in all a great story and I hope to see more.

@ Daydreamer09
Thank you! I was hoping it would fall somewhere in between, your feedback really helps. ^^

This is a really good start to the story! I like the way you've written it - it flows nicely, making it easy to read, and really draws the reader in. It's descriptive without being overly descriptive, which is a fine balance to make and you've achieved that really well. I can't wait to read more

@ lexi.may92
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I'll have the rest of the story done soon. :)

This is a really good story so far. You have a really good vocabulary with it; it kept me really entertained and you do a better job at explaining things then most authors I've read from. You should definitely continue to update this, if you do I can't wait to get the next chapter :)