All Is Fair in Love and War - Comments

Thank you! Glad you liked it! :3

Awww it's a girl, love the name and the ending was cute :)

I'm excited for the reveal can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Omg he proposed!!!!!!! Other than the chapters being about the baby how the epilouge being the wedding :) can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, Moon is finally free and can be with Brian, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I'm glad Michelle apologize, I think u should write two more chapters thn the bonus chapter thn end the story, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, y were they fighting in the first place, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, they like her can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Y is Michelle still around, go away bitch damn...congrats to Moon and Brian on the baby can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

My wish has been answered Moon and Michelle got into a fight and Moon whooped tht ass hell yeah, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, they r a funny group I think tht Moon should have a charming chat with Michelle about common courtesy like bitch didn't ur mother teach u tht staring is rude and ur face gets stuck like tht but I really want to see Moon and Michelle fight tho, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I think it's time for Moon to show Michelle tht she is the new woman in Brian's life and tht Michelle is a non factor now all u r is Val's twin sister and Brian's psycho ex wife u apparently likes to break into people's homes illegally, I think tht Michelle deserves an old fashion Moon ass whooping.....does anyone not agree with my decision *silence* alrighty thn off with the bitch's head!!! Anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I'll put it in the next chapter. :) I'll start writing later in the day! :D

What the hell happened between Zara and James?? Brian and Moon r cute, and Kayla and her story about her life was sad but im glad tht she had music in her life, great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Thank u Danny for letting Ben know tht he don't know shit about what happened to Moon and for telling Brian tht Ben was the one tht was tucking forcing Moon on the bus shoving his tongue down her throat as she tried to scream for help, anyhoo yay Moon and Brian is back together, Star got her ass beat thanks to Zara, Star is gone thank u Jesus and Moon's mum is fucking awesome, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, ah shit Moon is livid and kicked Ben's ass which was definitely needed, and I don't blame Moon she doesn't need ur pity I mean especially from the guys becuz they have been ignoring her and being assholes to her not evening knowing the real story just assume tht she cheated on Brian when she didnt, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Nooooooo Brian come back she doesn't want Ben she wants u, there has got to be someone tht fucking saw what happened before Brian came, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Awwww Brian finally asked Moon to be his bird, I think thts a cute little word, anyhoo the girls got a new merch girl who is pretty cool and a happy, great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Yes victory is mine!!! Moon booted tht bitch off the tour and left her jobless and sister less holy shit wat a fucking chapter omg I do not feel sorry for Star if anything I feel sorry for Moon becuz Ben betrayed her and their marriage and what's worse is tht it was with her sister thts fucked up big time, so goodbye Star have fun takin care of ur baby by urself becuz Ben isn't goin to help u, anyhoo on the upside Moon and Brian r doin good they belong together I mean they had a spark when they kissed so thts a good sign definintely and they also want kids too I mean tht is fate/destiny beyond the level so yeah and I hope tht Moon tells her parents the truth instead of whatever bogus story tht Star gave them, anyhoo I'm trying to figure out if he
asked her out yet, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Yes Moon found out about the truth and punched the hell out of fucking Star thts what ur ass gets u whore, I can't believe tht bitch is fucking pregnant omg I am livid like seriously I wish tht Moon could do more damage on her but nooo she is fucking preggers oh well Zara beat her ass and Moon broke her nose i will take it but i want an actual fight between Moon and Star it would make my day, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)