Redesign Me. - Comments

  • JoseeSkyexx

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    Ohmygod! This story sounds amazing! This is such a different and unique story. Consider me hooked! :D I cannot wait to see what Snow does to fix the boys. UPDATE SOON PLEASSEEEEEE!!! :D
    Love love love this already!
    November 5th, 2012 at 02:52am
  • elle me dit.

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    This is so good! I already love Snow, I can't wait to see her in action and oh my god...I felt so sad when you were like, Louis had tears in his eyes...oh I can't wait to read more. This is magnificent!
    November 5th, 2012 at 02:06am
  • State Of Grace

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    Oh my gosh I love this. I feel like this is a scenario that could definitely happen. It's not something far fetched an that makes it really interesting. Love this, update soon!
    November 5th, 2012 at 01:31am
  • kimmiedyce

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    This is really good so far. I LOVED The Maine reference. I like how it's different. Just one small thing, in the first chapter, you were using the wrong 'their'. The correct one is "they're" since you are saying "they are not one direction" instead of the possessive form 'their' which means someone's object. Other then that, it's fantastic. Keep up the good work.(: I look forward to this one.
    November 5th, 2012 at 12:28am
  • ineizainsanity

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    I love this omg.
    November 4th, 2012 at 11:34pm
  • Beyond Words

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    I'm so excited! I love where this story is going so far. :) Keep up the great work.
    November 4th, 2012 at 11:34pm
  • elle me dit.

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    Love this so far! I cannot wait to see this girl and figure out how she's going to change them.
    November 4th, 2012 at 02:09pm