Silent Touch - Comments

  • MadWomanInBlueBox

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    November 5th, 2012 at 09:29pm
  • Vartokk

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    Definitely a topic that not many people feel comfortable covering, but I like where it is going. I do have to ask when/where the story is set though considering slavery is clearly a prominent part of the story line. I thought maybe it was just slavery in the household when I read the summary, but then the Young woman mentioned slave girls.

    I'll be waiting for another chapter. It is good so far :)
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:51pm
  • bernthal.

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    Very interesting! I like what you have going and am curious to see where this goes. I am guessing this is set in a modern world, as Ethan was on a laptop? So curious to find out why slavery is happening in that age! If I could make one suggestion, it would be to space out or indent the dialogue from the other paragraphs. It would be easier to read that way.
    November 5th, 2012 at 05:35pm