@ PedicuntRevenge That's really great, and I love how you described it! I'll be chucking flashbacks in every so often, so I might make that one -it could definitely fit in with where I'm aiming to go with this. So, if you think I do leave anything else out, just let me know, and I should be able to do something about that :D
@ SquiddyTheMouse Thank you, honey! I did mean to update.. yesterday, I think. But school work, and now I'm ill haha So soon, before the week is out!
I still love it. Fast-paced or not because I still can feel that grey/sepia atmosphere idk x) I guess I would've liked to know how they got back together though, but hey that's fine, as long as love is there ! :D
Hi again! Time for my opinion! Now where to start? Oh, yes... You are such a tease. They were getting into it and then there was the noises that made them stop. Ah well, now I'm wondering who -or what- made the noises. Hmm... Great chapter! Please update soon!
Holy shit. Holy fucking shit. This is just, all the awesomeness in the world put into a fiction. The idea is plain amazing, and you write beautifully well, let me tell you. I really like the way Gerard behaves, it adds a little dark atmosphere to the world-ending atmosphere (which is basically already dark but whatever).
I really definitely am in love with this (and probably you because come on, I can see through the story that you're as awesome as your first chapter. Yes this is a compliment. I think.) and I hope to see more of it really soon !
:3 Loving this so much already. You did such an awesome fucking job on the summary, it caught my attention. It's really hard to do that, haha. Anyways, I can't wait for you to update soon!