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  • Taffyta Muttonfudge.

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    I rarely encounter good One Direction fanfiction, so this is a delightful change! I very much like the plot line and the characterizations of the family are very realistic and I can see the characters existing in a real sense. Very good personal relationships which is often hard to do in writing. Lovely!
    May 27th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    hehehe, i was towards Louis side but at the end I'm on her side!! YEAH, you go girrrl!
    March 28th, 2013 at 03:40am
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    I still don't like her friends, but whatever.
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:48am
  • You.Belong.With.Me

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    Changed my mind: THAT was my favorite chapter so far!
    Update soon!
    I loved it!
    November 27th, 2012 at 04:43am
  • mirandalikesmusic

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    WHOA
    CAN YOU SAY PLOT TWIST
    I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT KISS.
    ......THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY.
    UPDATE MORE.
    November 26th, 2012 at 04:43pm
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    HA, they're not on their first date yet, and Louis already kissed her.
    November 26th, 2012 at 05:03am
  • Xeroxierox

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    Right, I just want to get this straight, I dislike one directions music. A lot. I read this, thinking it was going to be shit. But I actually enjoyed it. That is like a major compliment by the way ^-^
    so yeah, I think it is amazingly written and it's a cute story
    PS. I'm also a guy. So double kudos for you, it's apparantly hard to get guys to like 'love' stories. But whatever. I'd read similar things and I never thought I would have before. :3
    ~Xerox
    November 13th, 2012 at 11:41pm
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    I guess her friends are okayish for now. :D
    November 12th, 2012 at 03:43am
  • You.Belong.With.Me

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    Faaavorite chapter so far!
    I loved it!
    I can't wait to see what happens with her and Lou!
    November 12th, 2012 at 03:36am
  • You.Belong.With.Me

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    Love, love, love!
    Baby Liam needs to chill. Louis knows what he's doing! ;p
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    November 9th, 2012 at 12:56am
  • Battery After.

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    He asked the Irishman
    I need Da bby Niallz in my life
    November 7th, 2012 at 09:21pm
  • Battery After.

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    Why do I feel like this is our real family? Just with 1D in the mix?
    November 7th, 2012 at 08:50pm
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    Pulling down your shirt and pulling up your skirt? Being wild does not mean being a slut. :D
    November 7th, 2012 at 03:19am
  • You.Belong.With.Me

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    Aahh!
    I loved that chapter!
    Can't wait for the next one!
    Hurry up! (:
    November 7th, 2012 at 01:36am
  • GoodGirl;

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    I LOVE THIS!! Update soon
    November 7th, 2012 at 12:35am
  • the_space_between

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    Spotted!!! Yay:) they're gonna reunite and it's going to be heartwarming and wonderful. Update soon!!
    November 6th, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    :D I had to rush through this or I'll be late to school.
    Anyways, I'm just saying if I was Megan, I'll be like really annoyed with my grandparents all the time.
    November 6th, 2012 at 02:43pm
  • GoodGirl;

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    Awesome
    November 6th, 2012 at 01:14pm
  • You.Belong.With.Me

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    Loved it, of course!
    I have feeling it's about to get interesting!
    Hurry and update!
    November 6th, 2012 at 06:54am
  • You.Belong.With.Me

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    Aww, fetus Louis!
    God love!
    I really liked this chapter!
    It was very cute! (:
    November 6th, 2012 at 04:23am