The Deep End. - Comments

Taffyta Muttonfudge. (100)

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I rarely encounter good One Direction fanfiction, so this is a delightful change! I very much like the plot line and the characterizations of the family are very realistic and I can see the characters existing in a real sense. Very good personal relationships which is often hard to do in writing. Lovely!

May 27th, 2013 at 07:11am

Infinity and Beyond; (100)

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hehehe, i was towards Louis side but at the end I'm on her side!! YEAH, you go girrrl!

March 28th, 2013 at 03:40am

Infinity and Beyond; (100)

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I still don't like her friends, but whatever.

December 10th, 2012 at 05:48am

You.Belong.With.Me (100)

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Changed my mind: THAT was my favorite chapter so far!
Update soon!
I loved it!

November 27th, 2012 at 04:43am

mirandalikesmusic (100)

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WHOA
CAN YOU SAY PLOT TWIST
I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT KISS.
......THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY.
UPDATE MORE.

November 26th, 2012 at 04:43pm

Infinity and Beyond; (100)

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HA, they're not on their first date yet, and Louis already kissed her.

November 26th, 2012 at 05:03am

Xeroxierox (100)

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Right, I just want to get this straight, I dislike one directions music. A lot. I read this, thinking it was going to be shit. But I actually enjoyed it. That is like a major compliment by the way ^-^
so yeah, I think it is amazingly written and it's a cute story
PS. I'm also a guy. So double kudos for you, it's apparantly hard to get guys to like 'love' stories. But whatever. I'd read similar things and I never thought I would have before. :3
~Xerox

November 13th, 2012 at 11:41pm

Infinity and Beyond; (100)

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I guess her friends are okayish for now. :D

November 12th, 2012 at 03:43am

You.Belong.With.Me (100)

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Faaavorite chapter so far!
I loved it!
I can't wait to see what happens with her and Lou!

November 12th, 2012 at 03:36am

You.Belong.With.Me (100)

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Love, love, love!
Baby Liam needs to chill. Louis knows what he's doing! ;p
Can't wait for the next chapter!

November 9th, 2012 at 12:56am

Battery After. (100)

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He asked the Irishman
I need Da bby Niallz in my life

November 7th, 2012 at 09:21pm

Battery After. (100)

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Why do I feel like this is our real family? Just with 1D in the mix?

November 7th, 2012 at 08:50pm

Infinity and Beyond; (100)

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Pulling down your shirt and pulling up your skirt? Being wild does not mean being a slut. :D

November 7th, 2012 at 03:19am

You.Belong.With.Me (100)

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Aahh!
I loved that chapter!
Can't wait for the next one!
Hurry up! (:

November 7th, 2012 at 01:36am

GoodGirl; (105)

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I LOVE THIS!! Update soon

November 7th, 2012 at 12:35am

the_space_between (100)

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Spotted!!! Yay:) they're gonna reunite and it's going to be heartwarming and wonderful. Update soon!!

November 6th, 2012 at 11:06pm

Infinity and Beyond; (100)

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:D I had to rush through this or I'll be late to school.
Anyways, I'm just saying if I was Megan, I'll be like really annoyed with my grandparents all the time.

November 6th, 2012 at 02:43pm

GoodGirl; (105)

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Awesome

November 6th, 2012 at 01:14pm

You.Belong.With.Me (100)

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Loved it, of course!
I have feeling it's about to get interesting!
Hurry and update!

November 6th, 2012 at 06:54am

You.Belong.With.Me (100)

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Aww, fetus Louis!
God love!
I really liked this chapter!
It was very cute! (:

November 6th, 2012 at 04:23am