Kitty - Comments

I love the ambiguity of the story. I keep on trying to figure out what happened in the characters' pasts and how they ended up in the situation that they're in, but I always end up feeling like I missed the bulls-eye when you throw something new in that doesn't add up to what I've conjured up in my mind. And it's not a bad thing at all, I love how you've written this so vaguely that we're all trying to figure out what's going on. I'm interested in learning more about this story.

I'm glad I happened to stumble over this, because it's seriously an insanely brilliant piece. I feel like I'm losing my mind, myself. I feel terribly awful for Landon. I want to know more of his situation and I hope to know more of Kitty. What interests me most about Kitty, though, is the scars that Landon is often touching. And how that that relates to the nightmares and delusions that Landon seems to have. To me, they seem like they could be very closely related. And in the last chapter when Kitty is called Dr. Booker... that kind of caught me off guard and interested me. I think all in all I am most interested in Kitty. This seriously is beautiful. I hope to see more soon! ❤

This is so confusing but I seriously can't look away! It's starting to make sense to me though and I hope you update soon!!!

Yep, okay, starting to make sense now. :)

Okay, so for me, this story is pretty freakin confusing - but I guess it's meant to be, so it's okay (unless I'm just being an idiot and can't figure things out). So, here's my pitch on what's going on:
Landon has an eating disorder. His "mother" isn't really real, just something he conjured up in his head for reasons unknown to me. I think this because of that whole burning piano scene. "Kitty" is a real person, but I'm not sure if that's his real name or not. "Kitty" is Landon's partner/boyfriend and has good intentions for Landon, but always ends up doing whatever Landon wants. I also believe that Landon is a psychopath (almost positive he is), which I believe because of the mother he imagined and because of that scene where he was talking to "Kitty" about the woman and the blood, which I assume was him saying that he killed her.
Yep. Not sure if I hit the mark, or if I missed it entirely.
This story is interesting (but confusing) so please update it soon

i completely agree with @XXXataktoulaXXX you're a very talented writer with a high chance of maybe publishing a book, you're very professional in you're writing style :) i like it, you get a better picture of whats going on and facial features, all of that, you're really good at :) so please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens next <3

Damn, you have some serious writing skills. Keep up the great work. I wanna read more of this great piece. :)