I really like this so far! Emily seems like she's going to be sassy and entertaining. She'll be a fun one to keep up with. I'm just kind of laughing a little bit though because 909 is an area code in Southern California. Great job, though! I can't wait to read more!
I have the feeling that I'm going to end up really loving Emily's character. Her attitude and the way that she put Louis in his place was perfect. I can't wait to read more of this!